[“It’s not fair.” The woe of naivety, not a military commander. Sometimes the child doesn’t die. She can’t begrudge him for it.
[The sentiment hangs in silence. It won’t be denied.
[Maybe minutes pass. Hours. Nights. But, in time:] If you’d like to sleep. I’ll keep watch.
[If he hasn’t drifted already…]
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[“It’s not fair.” The woe of naivety, not a military commander. Sometimes the child doesn’t die. She can’t begrudge him for it.
[The sentiment hangs in silence. It won’t be denied.
[Maybe minutes pass. Hours. Nights. But, in time:] If you’d like to sleep. I’ll keep watch.
[If he hasn’t drifted already…]